Prototec stage 4

Today I went on Prototec stage 4 it was so easy it took me four minutes and fifty three seconds.I got 59/60

I think this is my best of all the times iv'e tried it.

The next step is to do it faster then four minutes and fifty three seconds.

I think I need to go on to stage 5.

Friendliness

How to be a nice friend.

1.To have nice manners like please and thank you.

2.Don't be a bully.

3.Help them when they hurt them self.

My goal this term is to make sure everyone is happy and friendly around the school.

Here is a story called: The bully,stand up

Once upon a time there was a bully around a big friendly school that he used to bully everyone.Until he got told to go to the principals office and had to go to detention.When he got out he was sad so this kid named Tyler came over and said do you want to be my friend because iv'e got no friends.After all that the bully had heaps of friends and he didn't bully anyone.The end

 


My reflection on this piece of writing is that I think I set my placement of writing and punctuation.

Prototec stage 2-3

We went on Prototec stage 2-3.

 I want to go to stage 4 because I got 30/30

Writing Blog Comments

Writing Blog Comments...Before and After

   This week we have been learning how to Blog comment.        

Before-

I haven't got a greeting.I have a capital i.I have a capital for Aryan.I don't have a question or an I wonder.

After-

I have a capital for Rimu Class.I have a capital for my name.I have a capital at the start of the sentence.I have an I wonder.

Mindmup

This is my kutai mindmup

Prototec

Today I went on Prototec the level I was on was stage 4.

I got 58/60 I think I done well it is a bit to easy for me.