Hi guys today I am looking at my progress in writing.
Porter Pig was a very famous pig on farms all across the world. Not only could he lift a barn above his head, but he also had the best snout that anyone had ever seen. Porter Pig was the best at sniffing out trouble. He could smell trouble from fifty miles away. Whenever Porter Pig found trouble, he was always able to fix the problem and make everything okay.
Farmers all over the world asked to see Porter Pig, hoping that they would be able to use his strength and snout to make their farm peaceful.
One day, on a farm in the south, Porter Pig was sniffing for trouble when he smelled the worst smell he could ever imagine. Porter Pig rushed over to the barn where the smell were the smell was very strong. He lifted up the huge barn above his head, and there it was staring right into his eyes. Porter Pig had never seen anything like this before.
They had big beady eyes,the colour was a dark grey. They were as big as him,They had big ears and they stunk worse than a skunk He seen huge Bunny rabbits with heaps of giant carrots. They took all the giant carrots out of the farmer’s garden.
Porter pig showed the farmer. When the farmer seen he got so furious he called the cops. When they got back the bread bandit found the carrot bandit and when it was lunchtime they snuck out of the prison. But porter pig smelt them out. When porter pig got there he wanted to fight them so he brung a friend to fight them to. When they found a ring they wanted to do tag team so they did. Who knows who won, the bandits won but when they were not looking then police handcuffed them and took them to jail so they would never get out “the bread bandit said it was a set up”.
Porter pig wanted us to fight him so we could win and then the cops would come and handcuff us up. Carrot bandit got really angry and ripped his shirt off and he turned into the scariest monster porter pig has ever seen so he ran but porter pig was the toughest pig in the world so he turned around and stabbed him and carrot bandit sadly died and porter pig had never killed someone before so he said “bread bandit I am so sorry I just can’t control my temper”.Bread bandit said “why can everyone control their temper but you”.I’ll be at your funeral.
The end
I done this in term 1 it's not my best work.
Dear Tyler
I know you like playing with me and you love me but why did you just leave me on your duchies now and go play with your xbox one. Ever since then you have always walked past me. Whenever you play your xbox I always look at you having so much fun with your friends playing all the fun games. If you think my games are boring and weird. Now your brothers just wreck my controller, leave food on top of me and spill water on me. I hope one day you will play with me.
Hi Tyler it’s me your Xbox one 🎮 don’t listen to him. He's just jealous that you play with me all the time and not him. He only wants to get rid of me so you can play with him again.
It’s me again could you atleast play with me a bit more and tell your brothers to stop putting food and spilling water on me. I know your xbox has way better games and graphics than me but I want someone to play with me.
From your old friend
Xbox 360
Dear Xbox 360
I’m sorry for leaving you on my duchies. It’s just that i’ve been wanting an Xbox one for agers and I don’t hate your games they’re fun to play.
I’m sorry about my brothers putting food on you and spilling water on you. It was mostly my fault because I put a blanket over you so my brothers wouldn't see it but it didn’t work. I tried to turn you on but you wouldn’t work so I just left you there I am so sorry.
Dear Xbox One
I know you are my favourite but could I play with Xbox 360. It's just because I feel sorry for Xbox 360 because my brothers spilt water on him and put food on him now he's all dusty and wrecked. I didn’t want my brothers breaking him anymore so I hid him. But it didn’t work and wrecked him even more so now I can’t play him.
From your friend Tyler
I done this in term 2 it's better than my Porter pig story because It's better quality.
